在我們國家，野生動物的數(shù)量在不斷減在我們國家，野生動物的數(shù)量在不斷減少其中一些甚至瀕臨滅絕原因如下：少其中一些甚至瀕臨滅絕原因如下： 人們?yōu)E伐樹木人們?yōu)E伐樹木 以修建房屋，導(dǎo)致一些動以修建房屋，導(dǎo)致一些動物沒有了棲息地；而且，農(nóng)民濫用農(nóng)藥，物沒有了棲息地；而且，農(nóng)民濫用農(nóng)藥，威脅一些動物的生命除此之外，為了賺威脅一些動物的生命除此之外，為了賺錢，人們?yōu)E殺珍惜野生動物錢，人們?yōu)E殺珍惜野生動物 依我看，該是時候我們采取措施改變現(xiàn)依我看，該是時候我們采取措施改變現(xiàn)狀了我們不能濫砍濫伐，而應(yīng)多種植樹狀了我們不能濫砍濫伐，而應(yīng)多種植樹木以保護動物的生活環(huán)境同時，應(yīng)該建木以保護動物的生活環(huán)境同時，應(yīng)該建立更多的自然保護區(qū)立更多的自然保護區(qū) 我相信只要我們立即采取行動，我們就可我相信只要我們立即采取行動，我們就可以跟動物和諧并存生活會更加美好以跟動物和諧并存生活會更加美好Para one: The present situation In our country, the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller.Some of them are even dying out.一二段之間的過渡句：一二段之間的過渡句：??The reasons are as follows.Many factors contribute to / lead to / result in the problem.para. one the number of wild animals be dying out In our country, the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller.Some of them are even dying out. The reasons are as follows: 或者或者Many factors contribute to / lead to / result in the problem.過渡句過渡句：： reasons 或或 factorsPara Two：：reasons for the phenomenon①①砍樹以修房屋砍樹以修房屋：： 導(dǎo)致導(dǎo)致 沒有棲息地沒有棲息地Sentences:◎◎◎cut down trees ★★to build houses ★★ for building●lead / cause sb / sth to do ●lead to / result in doing People have been cutting down trees to build houses / for building.This causes many animals to lose their habitats.▲have no place to live in ▲ lose one’s habitatsPeople have been cutting down trees for building, causing causing many animals to loseto lose their habitats causing causing many animalsmany animals to have to have no place to live live inin.②②濫用農(nóng)藥濫用農(nóng)藥 害死一害死一 些動物些動物 ????Sentences：：◎◎use too much pesticide v.◎◎ the abuse of pesticide n. Farmers use too much pesticide and this causes some animals to die. / and this endangers the lives of some animals.☆☆ kill some animals☆☆ cause some animals to die☆☆ endanger the lives of some animals Farmers use too much pesticide, ◆◆which endangers the lives of some animals. causing some animals to die. The farmers’ abuse of pesticide causes some animals to die. endangers the lives of some animals.??③③濫殺珍稀野生動物濫殺珍稀野生動物 為了賺錢為了賺錢Sentences:kill rare wild animalsto make money make a fortune make huge profitsSome people have been killing rare wild animals to make huge profits.羅列觀點常用詞：羅列觀點常用詞：＠＠＠＠＠＠＠＠＠＠To begin with, then, furthermore, finallyTo start with, next, in addition / additionally, finallyMost important of all, moreover, last but not leastFor one thing, for anotherOn the one hand, on the other handpara.2 reasons①① cut down trees ★★to build houses ★★for building●lead / cause sb / sth to do ●lead to / result in doing ▲have no place to live in ▲ lose one’s habitats②② ◎◎use too much pesticide ◎◎ the abuse of pesticide ☆☆ kill some animals☆☆ cause some animals to die☆☆ endanger the lives of some animals③③ kill rare wild animals to make huge profits make money To start with, people have been cutting down trees for building, leading to some animals losing their habitats. Besides, farmers use too much pesticide, which endangers the lives of some animals. In addition, to make money, some people have been killing rare wild animals.保護環(huán)境，愛護動物，不去傷害它們：保護環(huán)境，愛護動物，不去傷害它們：③③ 建立更多的自然保護區(qū)建立更多的自然保護區(qū)Sentences:????protect animals and the environment they live inset up more nature / natural reservesPara.3 measures and conclusion or an appeal不要亂砍濫伐：不要亂砍濫伐： stop cutting down trees without permission We should stop cutting down trees.We should protect animals and the environment they live in.We should set up more nature reserves組句成文：組句成文： We shouldn’t cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals’ living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up.an appeal??I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and our life will become better.In this way we can make our planet a better place for both human beings and animals.二三段過渡句：二三段過渡句： ?? ?? Therefore, it’s time we took measures to change the situation.Thus, immediate measures must be taken to change the situation.②②protect animals and the environment they live in③③set up more nature / natural reserve①① stop cutting down trees without permission Para.3measures and conclusion or an appeal過渡句過渡句 in my opinion take measures/steps/action to do sth.呼吁呼吁 as long as in harmony with life In my opinion, it’s time we took immediate measures to change the situation. We shouldn’t cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals’ living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up. I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and life will become better.Dear editor, In our country, the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller. Some of them are even dying out. The reasons are as follows:The reasons are as follows: To start with, people have been cutting down trees for building, causing some animals to lose their habitats. Besides, farmers use too much pesticide, which endangers the lives of some animals. In addition, to make money, some people have been killing rare wild animals. In my opinion, it’s time we took immediate measures In my opinion, it’s time we took immediate measures to change the situation.to change the situation. We shouldn’t cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals’ living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected tobe set up. I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and life will become better.。